KSE fanfic

[Iscin_Chil]

Here is a little something i've started hope u enjoy ;D.

Primero Iscin and The Somtaaw Bounty Hunters

Prolouge (kinda) : First let me explain whats going on (kinda), ya see this novel (as will be most of my novels for KSE), is based on the setting that the mod Onslaught for Homeworld : Cataclysm provides for use, excusing the wackey ships, and is kinda set for the Somtaaw having created the Guild of Beast Bounty Hunters.
You see despite the Naggoroks(i know i have spellt its wrong so please let me know HOW its is spelt so that i can correct it, thankyou) big defeat and everything there were certain strains of the beast which surrvived and went through a MASSIVE mutation that not only gave them collective sentience (REAL INTELLIGENCE) again but also they (IT!) mutated certain immunities to the ways Kiith Somtaaw, discovered how to fight it.
And so we have this situation with the newly created Guild, trying to exterminate the pest once and for all time, however...........


They are HERE thought the beast mind to itself FILTH THAT THEY ARE,,, ah but they will make good nurishment,,, good for making MORE SELVES.
The beast mothership began to power its systems to 100% efficiency and prepared to hyper into the middle of the incoming skirmish of Guild ships. Once in range the new and improved beast mothership could easily infect almost all of their vessels, and if any surrvived they would'nt last for long as their own ships turned against them.

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"Well? Is the beast here or is'nt it?", came the annoyed voice of the guild, fleet's commander, which was directed at the TACO, "Sir, with all due respect it takes a little more time to run a full sensor sweep of a sector than 15 seconds", came the restrained reply of the TACO, who had a distain for his new commanding officer, "Alright just try and make it go as fast as you can", came the now, impatient voice of the fleet commander.
Just then the beast mothership hyperspaced right into the middle of the guild fleet, just midships of the flagship. "By the sands of Kharak, the thing really does exs....", thats as far as the fleet commander got when the first improved infection beam lashed out headed straight for the flagship.

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Selves spreading,,, selves growing,,, selves STRONGER........

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Meanwhile 1'345 light years across the galaxy

[somtaaw]

'Martyr of Kharak' not sands

plus it would go

**********Selves has joined parts
**********Selves has completed Subvertion
**********Selves HAS become Strooonger.........
(other ship ***WE LIVE***)


Oh and its called 'Naggarok' if u wish to get a better understanding of the ships names might i suggest
www.well-of-souls.com/homeworld/hws/
its the HW shipyard page

or u could hav (Ship: we hav breaches across all decks *---* Something's Come aboard - ITS KILLING US*---* HELP US - HELPPPP UUUUSSSSSS *---* SeLvEs WiLl TaKe YoUr PaRtS!! *---* *Beast Subvertion Sound*

A bit like the Convoy getin subverted but a remix

[somtaaw]

hehehehe a list of words


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Second Guild Fleet - ops -
-Fleet Size-

10 Assult Frigates
8 Ion Frigates
4 Multibeam Frigates
2 Ramming Frigates

300 Acolites
50 AVC's
20 Mimics
10 MVC's

1 Command Ship

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15 hours after the first fleet was subverted

"Sir, We hav juz recieved intel on our main fleet."
"Ok soldier report"
"...........our first fleet failed sir, they were infected by a new infection attack, our science Dep is currently working on the tapes"
"Martyrs of Kharak, how are we goin to find intel on how to defeat this new threat, when our first fleet is subverted....."

Right then Several hyperspace gates appeared and the bulk of subverted ships arrived with 1 beast carrier

The Beast Started to stirke the 2nd fleet


"SIR!!!!! Incoming Hyperspace signatures, ITS our first fleet!!, uhhhhh NO!!!, Beast Missiles on intercept Course, The First fleet is powering Weapons they are heading for us!!"

"Pilot PREPARE FOR HYPERSPACE, we shall no be subverted!!!"

"Roger SIR, Hyperspace in progress!"

As the 2nd fleet hyperspaced, beast missles hit 2 ion frigate on the right flak were subverted as parts

The Beast in all its glory dosnt decided to intercept

2 hours later the 2nd fleet arrives at thier 4th Shipyard......

"Report!!!!"

"Sir 2 Ion frigates didnt make it and a resource collector"
"Ok Dock with the Shipyard for repairs and Prepare for new orders, comm's transmit message to the beast hunters"

"Sir we lost contact with Somtaaw's Fleet"

"Jesus we are losing fleets all over the system, we arnt safe here, after repairs we hav to take refuge in an abandoned debris field"

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well im not very good at stories but i guess that was my first lol

u lot come with some now

[Iscin_Chil]

[glow=red,2,300]Oh my good night
What a HYPOCRITE!!!!!!!!!! .
First u say that its 'Martyr of Kharak' then u say "Jesus"!!!
Beside whos doing this u or me?
I wanted to us asteriks * for the time displacment, have u ever read novels? Cause i've read almost 40 Sci-Fi Novels TOP QUALITY i'm HELL good in my English lessons and i KNOW how to right a book.
You CAN say sands cause thats what command said at the start of the preultimate level in cata "the sands in our favour".
Kharak was no MARTYR it did NOT die for a cause it was just a kinda a semi genocide.
Another thing i wanted a borg collective intelligence to this mutated beast to give it a edge to the story so no "other ship ***WE LIVE***".
Another thing i had the idea for a going to Hiigara and giving some background info and to revela the secret underwater shipyards on Hiigara, plus i had a corny time system such as HH (Hiigaran Hours), remeber a cata cutscene where the science tech says "Hiigaran Years"?
DON'T WRITE MY STORY!!!!!
If ya must write a bit of fan fic then go and create a seperate thread and do it but don't interfere with MY WORK!!!
I have already completed the next installment but i don't have the work with me currently so you'll have to wait.
Sorry i had to snap like that Som but critisism is one thing but CREATING THE NEXT PART OF SOMEONE ELSES'S WORK (calm down, calm down).
I'm just gonna post this now[/glow]

[somtaaw]

get a grip was takin a crack at it no need to be like that lol remeber u can delete my post if u neeed


U HAV MAJOR STRESS anyway it was my first XD next time this happens and u get in a little temper then maybe i wont belong with this clan

final

[somtaaw]

Oh and if u played cata fully there is a bit when it goes "Martyrs of Kharak, look at what it has done to our lowership deck, its grown an entire Mothership, What is this thing" so it somthing bad happens and he's shocked it goes Martyrs

[CC_machine]

OK iscin im sure he didnt mean to offend you calm down..

[somtaaw]

juz to let you know Iscin

this was your version "By the sands of Kharak, the thing really does exs...."


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Phrases on Cata


"this might juz shift the sands in our favor" (Siege cannon location) (Sands only appear in this sentence during the whole cata game"

"Martyrs Of Kharak" IS SAID on the game and its a moment when something bad happens or to his horror

let me recap "By the sands of Kharak, the thing really does exs...."

Martyr's Of Kharak, the thing really does exs

now heres the phrase from what i said last time

"Martyrs of Kharak, look at what that thing has done to our lowerdeck section, its grown an entire Mothership around it, What is this thing?!"

That Represents bad, get it? BAD!

So please no need for your bad attitude, as i also said b 4 u CAN DELETE the post's so u can continue and forget this whole lot

[mantaray]

and now for the fan fiction.....